[스크랩] Raoul Teacher`s Writing Support {19}

I will talk about my dream.

My dream is a doctor, especially dentist.

>>> My dream is to be a doctor, so called dentist.

 

 

When I was 9, I pulled out my under front teeth.

>> When I was nine, I had an experience of pulling out one of my front teeth on the down side.

 

It was my first experience , so I was really nervous and scared.

But dentist talked kindly and set me at ease.

>> 끝을 made my heart free로

 

 

so it finished fine.

And then he gave me a present

 which is my two teeth with silicon.

I still have it, and it was my valuable memory.

At that time I  saw him I think dentist is good and wonderful job.

>> From that time I saw him, I have always thought that dentist is great.

 

 

Growing up, I know dentist is hard job.

In fact, be a doctor is really really difficult and hard.

>> be를 to be로

 

It's not easy to enter medical school.

If you get into there, a lot of study and many tests are waiting for you.

However go through that course and be a dentist, you live meaningful life and proud yourself,

>> However, after going through those hard courses and becoming a dentist, you will live a meaning ful life and take pride in yourself.  

 

 

To be a dentist I study very hard from now and make an effort.

>> I study를 I am studying으로

 

You know what they say "No pain, no gain."

if I study hard, I believe something is come to me.

>> come을 coming으로

 

I will certainly realize my dream and I will be a good dentist for children

so children don't scared but like me.

>> so childeren patients can't be scare like I was before.

 

Of course I earn a lots of money so I donate for poor people.

Thank you for your attention. 

>> And I can make a good living from my job, and donate some to help the people in need.

Thanks for your time.

 

 

...................

 

be 동사 뒤에는 동사가 아닌 형용사가 된 동사(-Ing나 ed 형태의 분사)가 와야 합니다.

제가 도움을 주는 것은

학생들의 마음을 얻기 위함입니다.

그 마음이 얻어지면

제가 가진 강한 기가

학생들에게 강하게 전달되어

학생들의 영어에 큰 도움이 될 수 있으리라 믿습니다. 

 

라 울 선생님

출처 : 라 울 선생님의 영어 혁명 제국

글쓴이 : 라 울 선생님 원글보기

메모 :