[스크랩] Raoul Teacher`s Writing Support {12}

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질문은 틀린 부분이 없을겁니다. 답변만 고쳐주시면 되고요.

답변이 질문에 적절하지 않다고 생각되시면, 더 좋은 내용으로 고쳐주셔도 됩니다^^

 

1. Do you think it matters what you wear?

I think that it matters what you wear. People usually judge us based on what you wear.

>> I think so. People usually judge me, based on what I wear. People say,"Don't judge a book by its cover." though.^^

 

2. Do you think it is important to dress a certain way depending on the activity you are doing?

I think that it is important to dress depending on the activity you are doing.

According to situation, people should wear appropriately.

>> Yes. I have to wear school uniform when I go to school. I have to wear casual when I hang out with my friends.

I have to wear freely when I clean my room. Various situations need various styles. 

 

3. If you were going on a first date with someone you really liked how would you dress?

If I am going on a first date, I wear a dress. I want to look like ladylike.

>> In that case, I want to wear a dress like a pretty woman. 

 

4. If you were going to a job interview how would you dress?

If I am going to a job interview, I wear a suit. In the job interview, first appearance is very important.

>> In that case, I want to wear a suit, to make my first image there attractive.  

 

5. Would you ever go to a wedding wearing jeans and a t-shirt?
Yes. I often used go to a wedding wearing jeans.

나는 청바지를 입고 결혼식에 간적이 있다. 또는 가곤했다.

>> Yes. I thought that I was just a visitor. I think it doesn't matter when I wear clean clothes. 

 

6. Have you ever gone to a costume party without a costume?

No, I have never gone.

나는 가본적이 없다.

> No, I haven't. In fact, I havenever visited that kind of party. 

 

7. What types of video or computer games are there?

action, sports, arcade, puzzle, rpg, and so on.

>>  There are actions, sports, arcade, puzzle, rpg, and the like everywhere.  

 

8. Do you play computer or video games?

No, I don't play game.

>> games로 쓸 것

 

If you don't play video or computer games, why don't you play them?

I don't like play game.

>> Sorry. I am not interested in them. 

 

9. Do you think video games are good for you or bad for you?
I think that video games are bad for me. Because playing video games are waste of time.

>> I think they are bad for me. They mean waste of time to me, because I am busy studying.^^  

 

10. If you had a child or have a child what would you think about them playing video or computer games?

If I have a child, I give a child time-limit.

가정법 문장이라, 주절에 will을 넣어야할지 말아야할지 잘 모르겠습니다.

내가 자식이 있다면, 나는 시간제한을 줄것이다.

>> If I had a son and he liked them, I would give him a small amount of time to play games. Maybe an hour a day? 

 

11. Do you think video or computer games can be educational?
Yes. I think that video or computer games can be educational.

For example, there is 닌텐도 for brain training.

예를 들어, 두뇌 트레이닝을 위한 닌텐도가 있다.

>> Ye, sometimes. There is a game for brain traing, in the series of Nin Ten Do. 

 

12. What advertisements do you remember the most?

I remember notebook advertisement acting baseball player 추신수

추신수가 연기하는 노트북광고를 기억한다.

>> Well, Mr. Choo, a great baseball player in the major league, was once featured in a laptop ad. 

 

13. What is something that makes you want to buy something?

I think that people buy because of positive side of product.

나는 물건의 긍정적인 면때문에 사람들이 물건을 산다고 생각한다.

>> I think that when I need something, I will buy it. That's all.^^ 

 

14. Is it the quality, brand name or price that is most important?

First of all, quality is very important.

무엇보다도 품질이 가장 중요하다.

>> I think quality is everything. 

 

15. If you see famous entertainer or athlete using a phone or drinking a soda does that make you want to buy it?

유명한 연예인이 광고하는 물건을 보고, 사람들은 나도 연예인처럼 될 수 있다는 헛된 희망을 가지게 한다.

>> I think that those ads makes people dream a big dream that they can be famous like the person in the ad. 

 

16. Do you think television ads help sell things? If yes why?

Yes, television ads play between programs.

so, 사람들의 기억에 강하게 남는다.

>> Yes, TV ads make people remember well, because of their visual image.

 

 

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