[스크랩] Raoul Teacher`s Writing Support {30} 교정 부탁드려요~!!!!! 쌤들 그리고 영어 잘하시는 분들 많은 관심가지고 교정좀 보아주세요...ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ 1-안녕 요즘 잘지내? - Hi! How are you doing? 2-음.. 안녕.. 그저 그렇게 지내.. - Hmm.. Hi... just so-so.. > I am just fine. 1-왜? - Why? 2-시험 기간이였거든.. - Because of the exam period... 1-아..시험은 .. 라울선생님의영작교수 2011.09.13
[스크랩] Raoul Teacher`s Writing Support {29} 안녕하세요 저는 제가 좋아하는 음식 중 프레즐의 만는는 방법을 알려드리겠습니다. Hi, I'd like to introduce you how to make Prezl. 먼저 프레즐이라는 음식은 미국식의 도넛의 일종이고, Prezl is a kind of American doughnuts, and 여성들에게 인기도 많으며, 반죽을 꼬아서 만들어 모양이 사랑스럽습니다. is favored by women.. 라울선생님의영작교수 2011.09.13
[스크랩] Raoul Teacher`s Writing Support {28} 1. Tell me about an important news story that happened within the last year. Make sure to use your past verb forms correctly. Cheonan warship is a Korean warship. >>과거형을 써라 했으므로 is를 was로 On March 16, unfortunately, Cheonan warship sunk in waters with 46 people inside. Most of the missing soldiers are >> sunk를 sank로 around my age. The fact hurts my heart. .. 라울선생님의영작교수 2011.09.13
[스크랩] Raoul Teacher`s Writing Support {27} subject: prejudice around us >> Discrimination. 인종차별 We often meet foreigners on the way. But we have different feelings whenever we meet white people, black people and Asians. Our country has been modernized by western countries, so we usually admire and respect white people. But we tend to neglect and ignore them because of their skin color. >> them은 백인이 아니니 .. 라울선생님의영작교수 2011.09.13
[스크랩] Raoul Teacher`s Writing Support {26} >> >> Comparing two cities I visited. There are too many cities to enumerate I have visited. >> 생략 When I get the chance, I like to travel to other places that I have not been before. I went to a huge, crowded city which is like seoul >> which is 생략, seoul을 Seoul and also small city which is as well. >> and then visited a snall city. There are many ways t.. 라울선생님의영작교수 2011.09.13
[스크랩] Raoul Teacher`s Writing Support {25} 나는 너의 문제를 이해해. 이 문제는 너만의 것이 아니야. - I understand your problem. this problem is not only yours. 내 생각에 너와 너의 룸메이트들은 규칙을 만드는게 좋을 것 같아. - I think you and your roommates should make rules. 예를들면, 방청소의 경우 요일을 정해서 각자 그 요일에 하는거야. -For example, in the event of.. 라울선생님의영작교수 2011.09.13
[스크랩] Raoul Teacher`s Writing Support {24} 제가 쓴 영작문인데요... 많이 미흡합니다...ㅠㅠㅠ 교정 도와주세요..ㅠㅠ A person not to be able to forget in my life is Park Ji-seong. 내 생애에 잊을 수 없는 사람은 박지성이다. >> I like a soccer play, Park, Ji-seong best. I can't forget him in my life. He is a soccer player the best the Republic of Korea being exist, and he is the Asian best pl.. 라울선생님의영작교수 2011.09.13
[스크랩] Raoul Teacher`s Writing Support {23} this is a few problem. It is system. there are too many students in class. so, I couldn't concentrate. >> I have a little problem. It is from the system of the class. Too many students here makes me fail to concentrate. she teaches dull class way. >> The female teacher's class makes me boring. I want to more interesting way. >> to 생략 for example, I want group work. Sometim.. 라울선생님의영작교수 2011.09.13
[스크랩] Raoul Teacher`s Writing Support {22} 2008년 4월 17일, 나는 '21세기 중동과 이슬람 문화의 새로운 이해'라는 주제로 한국의 이슬람학자인 이희수 교수의 강연을 들었다. I heard Hee Soo Lee's special lecture, who is an Islamic scholar, which is entitled 21st century a new understanding of the Middle East and Islamic culture in April 17, 2008 >> I listened to Professor, Lee, Hee-soo's lec.. 라울선생님의영작교수 2011.09.13
[스크랩] Raoul Teacher`s Writing Support {21} 허접하지만, 제 힘으로 써보고 고수님들 아낌없이 써주신 교정본 보면서 제 공부에 도움이 되었으면 하는 바램으로 교정 부탁드립니다~ 감사해요~ My guess is that it has been nearly 120 years since western cultures was introduced to Korea. It seems like the western culture formed a good relationship with missionaries built hospitals, schools, >.. 라울선생님의영작교수 2011.09.13